tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3851684039352914030.post6647982445194703061..comments2023-06-28T09:39:23.173+01:00Comments on Si's Falmouth Blog: Writing For The Media - News Assignment 1Sihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17004057884380681924noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3851684039352914030.post-28725601637668036042007-10-19T22:29:00.000+01:002007-10-19T22:29:00.000+01:00This demonstrates a grasp of news structure but wo...This demonstrates a grasp of news structure but would have been strengthened if you had put more emphasis on the racist postings higher up your story as these are what gave the crime/ and story so much impact. Written fluently, in concise paragraphs.<BR/>Quotes - There was a stronger quote from the judge than the one you have included.<BR/>Spelling and punctuation -- Watch this -- you have made a number of errors (eg. offences, behaviour). There are some missing hyphens.<BR/>Spell out numbers up to nine, is the general rule.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com