tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3851684039352914030.post4981651265245250224..comments2023-06-28T09:39:23.173+01:00Comments on Si's Falmouth Blog: Mail Misery Hits LannerSihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17004057884380681924noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3851684039352914030.post-74702342262195010672007-10-19T21:55:00.000+01:002007-10-19T21:55:00.000+01:00A clear example of a national to local story which...A clear example of a national to local story which demonstrates a good grasp of inverted pyramid structure. Intro is concise but be wary of exaggeration. Can you really demonstrate that locals have suffered an ‘agonising blow’. What does this mean?<BR/>Paragraphs are suitably short.<BR/>Audience -- It might have been more appropriate to look at how the strike has affected students/ Falmouth residents. <BR/>Research/ quotes. Good use of quotes but you might have secured a quote from a local postal worker. <BR/>Punctuation – watch your use of commas and punctuation around quotes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com